Illusion of Sleep

Daylight seeps black
Clock chimes-next routine
Cup of calm and honey brewed

Heartbeat increase-time for race
Mental noose in place
Devil gnaws at his leash

Twilight scratches face
Sleep has been slain and dreams weep
I remain awake

Today’s NaPoWriMo challenge was inspired by the theme of Pain and Sleep as a prompt on Magaly Guerrero‘s blog. I chose to use a set of three senryu, a form similar to haiku that conveys human experience and emotion.

Here is her prompt:

Imagine the ache, I just spoke of, twisting its fatigue around your muscles and squeezing your bones all the time… at different levels of intensity… while you are trying to fall asleep… Keeping this horrid bit in mind, for NaPoWriMo with Magaly Guerrero 2015, Day 23, I’m inviting you to picture what living this way might be like, then Write a poem that explores the intricate relationship between pain and sleep.

“Insomnia” is Original Art by Audrey Schwartz Rivers


7 thoughts on “Illusion of Sleep

  1. I like how you build this feeling of being trapped, both in a cycle and in a metaphorical noose. The inevitability of being trapped awake is very well conveyed.

    Liked by 1 person

  2. “Sleep has been slain and dream weep” Epic line!

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Thank you 😀 I’m glad you liked it

      Liked by 1 person

  3. Totally get it! Great piece!

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Thank you! I’ve had plenty of time to think about it….lol

      Liked by 1 person

  4. Nice rhyme scheme. Good write.

    Liked by 1 person

  5. I totally feel the dread in your piece. Just grabbing moments of peace when you can XXX

    Liked by 1 person

Talk to Me!

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in: Logo

You are commenting using your account. Log Out /  Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out /  Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out /  Change )

Connecting to %s

%d bloggers like this:
search previous next tag category expand menu location phone mail time cart zoom edit close