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Cool Velvet of Peace

Following my root paths, I dug into the intoxication of Mother Earth.

Inside Her,  a rough wooden box transformed into my cradle. Dirt fell away to reveal a beautiful angel, the color of honey.

I rose into the cosmos as a phoenix to find a cool velvet of peace just beyond a Veil of Mystery.

Stuffed into the mailbox of Poets on the Page and Sanaa’s Prompt Nights

Image courtesy of Morguefile.com

11 thoughts on “Cool Velvet of Peace”

  1. Sumana Roy October 4, 2016 — 4:49 am

    this has a beautiful calming effect…

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      Vagrant Rhodia October 4, 2016 — 1:53 pm

      I am happy you find peace within these words. I do as well 😀

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  2. elleceef October 4, 2016 — 12:20 am

    you create a very special mood with this writing,, “I rose into the cosmos as a phoenix ” wouldn’t that be a wonderful experience,,,

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      Vagrant Rhodia October 4, 2016 — 12:23 am

      Thank you. I saw the phoenix in a dream 😀

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  3. Sanaa Rizvi (@rizvi_sanaa) October 3, 2016 — 7:11 pm

    Whistles!!!❤️❤️This is absolutely gorgeous writing, Rose 😀 I am in complete awe of the images that you have painted here “I rose into the cosmos as a phoenix to find a cool velvet of peace just beyond a Veil of Mystery.” sigh beautifully executed. Thank you so much for participating at Prompt Nights and for your constant love and support ❤️❤️

    Lots of love,
    Sanaa

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  4. Jae Rose October 3, 2016 — 6:55 pm

    Yes the peace conveys very effectively..I hope when our time comes we can all rise to a peaceful place

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  5. Rommy October 3, 2016 — 5:25 pm

    Very dreamy and surreal. Sometimes autumn can feel that way.

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  6. Khaya Ronkainen October 3, 2016 — 5:24 pm

    Magnificent write! Love the last sentence “a cool velvet of peace just beyond a Veil of Mystery”. Masterly.

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  7. Teri October 3, 2016 — 5:20 pm

    Love the imagery this poem creates in my mind. Soothing.

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