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Liberty Belle

Liberty-belle, she walks along the shore

Mademoiselle in red platform shoes

Electric-spell cast no more

Scorpion-shell now her Muse

Dwell not on your poison pill

Sell your sadness by the crate

Spell out fire in ink and blood

Rebel voice your armor plate

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20 thoughts on “Liberty Belle”

  1. Jae Rose February 21, 2016 — 10:08 am

    A rebel voice and red shoes can carry you far…magic!

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  2. Em February 21, 2016 — 12:02 am

    This is really cool! I’d be hard-pressed to pick a favorite line; I love it all.

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      Vagrant Rhodia February 21, 2016 — 1:15 am

      Thank you so very much
      🙂 It was written last October

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  3. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) February 20, 2016 — 9:49 pm

    I think it’s a great way to find freedomed happiness.

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  4. Magaly Guerrero February 20, 2016 — 1:10 pm

    The tone of this poem makes me want to shake my fist in the air! And the last two lines are magnificent.

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      Vagrant Rhodia February 20, 2016 — 11:08 am

      I wrote it last year and it still rings true

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  6. whimsygizmo February 20, 2016 — 4:09 am

    I love the repeating rhyme in the beginnings of the lines. This works so well here.

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  7. Sanaa Rizvi February 19, 2016 — 10:36 pm

    Ah the fiery and ever resourceful scorpion woman 🙂
    Beautifully penned. Thanks for participating Rose.

    Lots of love,
    Sanaa

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  8. writersdream9 October 13, 2015 — 3:43 pm

    Excellent and motivating!

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  9. Kora-Leah Meet Faust Wilson October 13, 2015 — 3:37 pm

    amazing dare,
    sometimes, we do need to set up conditions to see what happens.

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  10. Grace Black October 13, 2015 — 3:10 pm

    There is strength in the voice of this poem! Well done.

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  11. ivywalker October 13, 2015 — 11:10 am

    OMG! I WANT TO LIVE THIS POEM! Its fabulous!

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  12. Nithya Venkat October 13, 2015 — 10:22 am

    Great write, well done. Loved this! Great future lies ahead!

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    1. James Toma (Jamztoma) February 20, 2016 — 5:30 pm

      Hi there! Your character Liberty Belle sounds like someone I’d follow on twitter, facebook, and instagram because she reminds me of bubblegum pop stars I admire so much. Loved it!

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