Roan of Morning Dew

White angel red shoe bound
Wagered with Eurus,

Roan of morning dew
Captive of
Earth’s daughter, spiteful angel
Bridled sailor’s sorrow
Gathering tempest
Discharged rider
Unfit bride

Bride unfit
Rider discharged
Tempest Gathering,
Sorrow (of) Sailor bridled Angel, spiteful daughter
Earth’s captive
dew Morning of Roan

Unfit bride
Discharged rider

Gathering tempest
Bridled sailor’s sorrow

Earth’s daughter, spiteful angel
Captive of Roan (and) morning dew

Felt like a little wordplay on this illustrious Tuesday for Mindlovemisery’s Menagerie and imaginary garden with real toads  amusement 😀

Imaginary Garden With Real Toads


17 thoughts on “Roan of Morning Dew

  1. Love wordplay. Well done!


  2. Absolutely Stellar! The echo of “unfit bride”….captivating.

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  3. The reversal here gives this a momentum and intensity worthy of a story of mythology 🙂

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  4. Snakypoet (Rosemary Nissen-Wade) June 17, 2015 — 2:01 pm

    You play vey nicely!

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  5. A whole lot of captivating going on here – I agree a spell to be spellbound.
    Cheers ~Jules.

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  6. Colleen@ LOOSELEAFNOTES June 16, 2015 — 9:47 pm

    I think you wove a spell! The red shoe really grounded me.

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  7. The poem gets stronger–and bolder, I think– through the reversal and repetition.

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  8. Oh, very cool. I especially like the “white angel red shoe bound”.

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  9. Marvelous play on words here.. 🙂

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  10. This is amazing!!!

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  11. A beautiful amalgamation of nature and human!!

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  12. Sounds like an unfit bride should refine from riding.. But maybe she fell for the sailor.

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  13. How interesting to read the variations of these lines.

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