Sugar Beet Shack

Midnight round at
sugar beet maze
Dodging shadows, bats?
Pressure’s on
Find invisible locks
Double check
Return to shack

Maze run in bat cave
Laurel and Hardy echos in my mind

Asleep in metal chair

Linked to dVerse Poets: Insta-Poetics Challenge

Image by Milestone Seed


15 thoughts on “Sugar Beet Shack

  1. Your poem was scarier than mine 🙂

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  2. Your poem made me feel claustrophobic! Very effective images.

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  3. a maze run in a bat cave is def something I’ll pass on… I won ‘t even go in a garden maze.. hahah

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    1. I was in my first actual cave last summer with a group of friends and got stuck in a random tunnel 🙂


  4. Ha. Sounds like that might wear you out. I love mazes though. Not too sure on being chased by bats. I slip into a cave of them once.

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    1. lol I’ll actually be caving this weekend


  5. Ah.. yes.. a busy life knows best.. awake at dawn.. work of life.. in practice does come.. and rarely does the time of 2am.. ever break sweat of a midnight brow..:)

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    1. Ah yes it is quite familiar to me 🙂

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  6. And where are then the Beetles playing?

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  7. what dreams come when bats and sugar beets dance ?

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    1. Throw in a ghostie and you got a party!

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  8. Snakypoet (Rosemary Nissen-Wade) May 20, 2015 — 12:41 pm


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