NaPoWriMo #8: Hurt vs. Harm

Hurt:
Sprained ankle
Rough night
Truth

Harm:
Wandering without shoes
Disconnect from family
Memories hidden in the dark
Absence of little ones


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NaPoWriMo with Magaly Guerrero 2015

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9 thoughts on “NaPoWriMo #8: Hurt vs. Harm

  1. You did so much with a few words. Very potent.

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    1. Eclectic Alli wrote today’s poem 😀

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      1. Lol I wasn’t awake when I read your comment. I wrote it and thank you. /turning a shade of embaress 🙂

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  2. There’s a world of physical ills I’d endure in places of that last line

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    1. I’d never wish it on my worst enemy

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  3. I am thinking your harm is so much worse than your hurt here–a perfect explication of the difference. Few words sometimes make strong feelings clearer.

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  4. georginamorley April 9, 2015 — 6:48 am

    Oh those lost memories….the pain they can cause us on so many levels XXX

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  5. That last line leaves a whole in the chest. Those words make you want to run screaming, and then just fall to pieces, empty…

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  6. Absence of little ones. 😦

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