Blacklight Candelabra Challenge: “First Night”

In response to Blacklight Candelabra Challenge: Linguistically Authentic Haiku:

Inside grotto of earth and stone

Breath, muscle and bone strain

against perpetual night


10 thoughts on “Blacklight Candelabra Challenge: “First Night”

  1. I love this haiku. Nicely done.

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  2. Ha. I didn’t even look at the picture, I must confess. 🙂


  3. This is GORGEOUS.


    1. This sounds like someone’s been buried alive and is trying to reclaim her existence among the living. I’m sure it’s a metaphor. 🙂

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      1. That is actually a picture of me struggling through my first tunnel in a cave in West Virginia. I decided to go for it and while I was inside the mud and stone, my boyfriend took a picture 🙂


    2. Added Bonus: That is my feet sticking out of the mud!


  4. This seems like a reversal of the birth process, defying the need for light and space.

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    1. It was an experience like no other, fighting further into darkness rather than towards light and warmth


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